Kia ora Logan, next time you post to your blog make sure it is a quality blog post. This includes a statement about your learning and a question at the end for the reader.
I also noticed a lot of your writing is in black, this makes it very hard to read since your background is a very dark grey. Next time you should definitely think about easy your work is to read.
I really enjoyed reading your acrostic poem about twister. You used some great words and sentences that are related to that game.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Good job logan for completing this weeks learning
ReplyDeleteKia ora Logan, next time you post to your blog make sure it is a quality blog post. This includes a statement about your learning and a question at the end for the reader.
ReplyDeleteI also noticed a lot of your writing is in black, this makes it very hard to read since your background is a very dark grey. Next time you should definitely think about easy your work is to read.
I really enjoyed reading your acrostic poem about twister. You used some great words and sentences that are related to that game.