Kia ora Logan, I like how you included a statement about your learning and a question at the end of your blog post for the reader. Don't forget to add labels next time! For the texts you read this week, I think you could have fit them all onto one slide rather than having them spread out across 2.'
I like how you included a photo on the reading task slide. For question two, it asked you to use evidence in the text to support your answer. You have answered "bored" and you just needed to provide a bit more information about how you know this.
I like how you have visually shown how to work the maths tasks you have chosen to do, however next time I would like to see you show your maths thinking as well (example: did you use multiplication, division, subtraction or addition to solve the question?)
I like the mini beast you created and I think it will be interesting to have a kiwi that could actually fly. I would have liked you to include a longer description about your mini beast. You mention that it has the same texture as a kiwi...but what is that texture? You also could have included what it eats, what its predators are and where abouts in the Papakura area the mini beast lives.y
I have also noticed you deleted the slide for the writing task. This was a MUST DO task. Will you be uploading this in a separate post? I have noticed you delete the writing tasks quite often for the LCS. I would really appreciate it if you completed these writing tasks and if you need support you can always send me an email.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Logan,
ReplyDeleteI like how you included a statement about your learning and a question at the end of your blog post for the reader. Don't forget to add labels next time!
For the texts you read this week, I think you could have fit them all onto one slide rather than having them spread out across 2.'
I like how you included a photo on the reading task slide. For question two, it asked you to use evidence in the text to support your answer. You have answered "bored" and you just needed to provide a bit more information about how you know this.
I like how you have visually shown how to work the maths tasks you have chosen to do, however next time I would like to see you show your maths thinking as well (example: did you use multiplication, division, subtraction or addition to solve the question?)
I like the mini beast you created and I think it will be interesting to have a kiwi that could actually fly. I would have liked you to include a longer description about your mini beast. You mention that it has the same texture as a kiwi...but what is that texture? You also could have included what it eats, what its predators are and where abouts in the Papakura area the mini beast lives.y
I have also noticed you deleted the slide for the writing task. This was a MUST DO task. Will you be uploading this in a separate post? I have noticed you delete the writing tasks quite often for the LCS. I would really appreciate it if you completed these writing tasks and if you need support you can always send me an email.
good job Logan I like what you did but where is your question...
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