Hi Logan, You did a great job answering the questions for the reading task 2. I also enjoyed looking through the timeline you created for Picasso. For reading task 1, it would have been great if you had attempted to answering the questions instead of deleting them. You did a great job answering your chosen math questions, however I would have liked to have seen you explain your maths thinking behind your answer so we can see the strategies you used. The art you created for the STEAM project is very eye catching, it would have been great if you included a description alongside it. That way we would know what your art represents and where it would be placed in Papakura. I also noticed you deleted the slides for the writing task. Will you be uploading this separating? Remember, that was a MUST DO task. Next time when you are adding labels to your blog posts remember to include a comma (,) between each word, otherwise it just becomes one large label.
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Hi Logan,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job answering the questions for the reading task 2. I also enjoyed looking through the timeline you created for Picasso. For reading task 1, it would have been great if you had attempted to answering the questions instead of deleting them.
You did a great job answering your chosen math questions, however I would have liked to have seen you explain your maths thinking behind your answer so we can see the strategies you used.
The art you created for the STEAM project is very eye catching, it would have been great if you included a description alongside it. That way we would know what your art represents and where it would be placed in Papakura.
I also noticed you deleted the slides for the writing task. Will you be uploading this separating? Remember, that was a MUST DO task.
Next time when you are adding labels to your blog posts remember to include a comma (,) between each word, otherwise it just becomes one large label.