Hi Logan. Nice work on completing the maths task. However I have noticed you have deleted quite a few slides. Where is your traffic vocabulary task and your creates? Remember these tasks were a MUST DO. Please go back through this slideshow and add those completed tasks. I would also like you to redo your writing. Your writing needs to include an opening statement, 3 points you are making to the reader and a conclusion. If you need some help with getting started on your writing you can send me an email. You already have 1 excellent point about kapa haka, can you think of 2 more?
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Hi Logan. Nice work on completing the maths task. However I have noticed you have deleted quite a few slides. Where is your traffic vocabulary task and your creates? Remember these tasks were a MUST DO. Please go back through this slideshow and add those completed tasks. I would also like you to redo your writing. Your writing needs to include an opening statement, 3 points you are making to the reader and a conclusion. If you need some help with getting started on your writing you can send me an email. You already have 1 excellent point about kapa haka, can you think of 2 more?
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