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Hi Logan, I liked how you have included why video games are good and bad. I also liked you point that video games can increase self confidence and self esteem. It would have been good if you included what kind of problems videos games can cause. You also need to remember that we make quality blog posts. This includes a statement about our learning, labels and a question for the reader at the end.
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