Kia ora Logan. Nice work this week. I particularly enjoyed your piece of writing and the information you included for your chosen topic. Make sure you read over your writing before you publish your work. This way you might notice your spelling or grammar errors. I think next time you could also try and use paragraphs in your writing.
Next time make sure you do not take a screenshot of my example answers and use them in your tasks. You have done this in activity 2. I worked through these questions during our Google Meet and you should have been able to answer these questions in your own words, without taking a screenshot of my work.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Logan.
ReplyDeleteNice work this week. I particularly enjoyed your piece of writing and the information you included for your chosen topic. Make sure you read over your writing before you publish your work. This way you might notice your spelling or grammar errors. I think next time you could also try and use paragraphs in your writing.
Next time make sure you do not take a screenshot of my example answers and use them in your tasks. You have done this in activity 2. I worked through these questions during our Google Meet and you should have been able to answer these questions in your own words, without taking a screenshot of my work.