Kia ora Logan, You have done a great job answering the maths questions about clocks. I noticed you did not answer the questions about the "must read texts". You needed to include structure or language features you noticed in the articles, for example: headings and subheading. Next time remember to delete the texts you have not read from the "extra reading" slide. I like the minecraft video you made for the Pahurehure, however you have no included a written description or a voice over for your video. This means I have no idea what your project is, and how it will help imporve the pollution in Pahurehure inlet. I have also noticed you have no done completed any of the writing tasks and you deleted the slide. Will this be uploading in a different post? Also please remember to make "quality" blog posts. This include a statement about your learning, a question at the end for the reader and labels. Some labels you could have included in this post are: LCS, Maths, Writing, Reading.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Logan,
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I noticed you did not answer the questions about the "must read texts". You needed to include structure or language features you noticed in the articles, for example: headings and subheading.
Next time remember to delete the texts you have not read from the "extra reading" slide.
I like the minecraft video you made for the Pahurehure, however you have no included a written description or a voice over for your video. This means I have no idea what your project is, and how it will help imporve the pollution in Pahurehure inlet. I have also noticed you have no done completed any of the writing tasks and you deleted the slide. Will this be uploading in a different post?
Also please remember to make "quality" blog posts. This include a statement about your learning, a question at the end for the reader and labels. Some labels you could have included in this post are: LCS, Maths, Writing, Reading.
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